Comments : Unchained Emotions (String Haynaku)

  • 5 years ago

    by ArtistrySoul

    There's a some what cold atmosphere 'brewing' when reading this poem lol . . . . a simple and plain piece but gives a punchy outburst of imagery.

    I found this was an argument, you compelled it well with your choice of words :P

    Nice short written poem 5/5

  • 5 years ago

    by Khalid

    This piece bears a great and strong message that one should have calmness when getting angry just by changing his/her place or situation. The large pain that anger leaves can be psychologically dangerous, especially on repetition causing precipitation to the other person.
    I loved your thought provoking poem.
    Thank you for sharing.