A very expressive piece, but you might need a little more editing so its easier for the readers to read and understand where to stop and start.

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Wow, that is deep, but you are not alone, everyone feels that way, and you will do great things, you have so much talent as a writer and so many other things, remember that

Wow, that is deep, but you are not alone, everyone feels that way, and you will do great things, you have so much talent as a writer and so many other things, remember that

Yeh. This is a life of many that you speak of.
Indeed, such an interesting writing. Nice work!