The poem flows very well. awsome sauce:)

I love it. It flowed beautifully. But I would fix all of the spelling mistakes.

Its true, and sad hw guys treat girls like a commodity, he doesn't know what he missing out on, keep writing!

Wow, that was overwhelming, gave me chills and definally mind knocking, that opened a whole new door for me, that is soooo poetic and so beautifully written and has loads of emotion bursting out of it, your heart is perefectly and clearly expressed here as well as your amazing talent for writing, and poetry, WONDERUFL JOB!

This is just so heartbreaking but incredibly relatable with a lot of people. I love your writing, it flows so well and this one just.. I don't even know how to comment other than wow! Amazing job :)

You expect the world when it comes to love. I have found that you still except them even without the promise. You dont want to but you do. We except the love we think we deserve. Great job honey bunches of oats:)

Wonderful rhyming and the flow is great. I really love this piece.