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I'm liking these new forms...
I'm going to have to give them ago.

Again well penned missy :)

Wow, that had so much meaning, great poe, I enjoyd reading it, very deep

Interesting form, never heard of it before and you made it look really easily.

I like the message of the poem, perhaps showing into the relationship between a child and their parent and how they do not understand somethings because they do not look close enough.

Nice job!