I like the 2 line in this poem since it makes me think of my childhood and this poem is very sweet and short but it would look prettier if it was centered that way it's looks and reads like a fairy-tale poem! :) overall it's good! :) 5/5

Queen Ash

This is cute. It rhymes, and it feels like it's touched with a little bit of magic. Short, and very, very sweet.

I like this!(:

I LOVE ALL OF IT, graceful and becoming, wonderful job, the way it flowed was so talent-filled and overwhelming, outstnading poem!

I LOVE ALL OF IT, graceful and becoming, wonderful job, the way it flowed was so talent-filled and overwhelming, outstnading poem!