Comments : Tear-stained

  • 4 years ago

    by L

    Sad piece, I wish to see a happy one from you some day. but this one was a good write.

  • 4 years ago

    by L

    Double post.

  • 4 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    I agree , come on saffs show us some happiness,
    Very good write tho as always :)

    • 4 years ago

      by Baby Rainbow

      There are happy ones further down the page, you have just missed them, they are there x

  • 4 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    100/100, I nominate this for the weekly poetry contest

  • 4 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Absolutely beautiful, add to my fav

  • 4 years ago

    by Darren

    Mirrors are a great inspiration to poets, they offer a mystical notion when it comes to including them in our work.
    I applaud the author for beginning this with a huge dollop of alliteration, which smacks you in the face, this mirror is reflecting a depressive tendency, it is showing the subject what she wants to see.
    Then we move onto our other favourite, the sky!! Yet this is seen in a different perspective. It is twisted, they again see the worst in it which is a great reflection of how they are feeling.
    Then we have hearts and hope.
    What I liked about this is the fact she took those four common ingredients (mirrors, sky., heart, hope) and wrote an original poem that contains a lot of depressive emotion and a lot of original imagery.
    Well done.