The Day We said GoodBye..

by Terrin   Feb 26, 2013


If only you could have seen all the tears i cried. The day i walked away from you a part of my heart died. I tried to let you go. So we bolth could move on. But my pain was a constant reminder that your gone. I wish we could have fixed things before they went so wrong. I guess things were bad for quite a while. It had been so long since you and i smiled. I iwish we could go back to the day we first met. Before our lives were filled with pain and regret. When you were all that mattered. Our trust and love wasnt shattered. Now my heart is torn in 2. Half is still him. And the other with you.

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  • 11 years ago

    by Kate

    Ok. Well, the word "first" is missing a 's' just to let you know.
    I like the rhyme in it but the flow is a little off because of the rhythm of the sentence. A few lines need a few extra words.
    Other than that, I like how you chose prose form instea of stanzas here. Makes it seem like more of a story than anything else.
    It is sad and heartbreaking. Love it.

  • 11 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    I LOVE THIS POEM SOOOO MUCH, YOU ARE SOOOOO TALENTED, 1000/1000, IT HAS SO MCUH EMOTION AND YOUR HEART IS UNLEASHED PERFECTLY!