Comments : Unearthed

  • 4 years ago

    by Karla

    I' m enchanted by the elegance of your piece.Great work.Nominated!

  • 4 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Judge Comment:

    I've read this piece several times now, each time I take something else with me from this poem.
    Lisa Marie has penned a poem filled with strength to overcome obstacles, and survive a sad time in the message of the poem perhaps. I like the nature metaphor given to enhance the feelings within this piece.

    I get the feeling she is talking to a spirit perhaps that has haunted her steps in life, or maybe that of someone who needs to be kept in the past.

    True elegance and simplicity in each stanza, however a soft touch of visual detail that brings this poem life.

    To me: What greater form of life and inspiration, than that of nature, and then to add a life message of survival, is truly wonderful in my eyes as a reader. Very nice!!

  • 4 years ago

    by Skys Gal

    Wow first I'd have to say I love the title it is so beautiful, I love the poem, it really captured my attnetion and my heart, bravo!