Who bows to rage, accepts defeat. Anger saved now, heals the war then. Quite an incredible put-up!

Very Nicely Done Rebecca!!!

I loved this. Some poems I just simply enjoy reading and this was one of them for sure!

Another great poem Rebecca!
Your words express emotion so very well.
A truly great write.

Love the message behind this ...

Also your word choice was very clear

Awesome little piece

This poem reminds me so much of a song by Rihanna called "Take A Bow"... but you made it your own.

Overall, a good piece...really like the ending!