Comments : Resiled Happiness

  • 4 years ago

    by ah satan 666

    @.@!!!

    I'm so happy this piece won... Whoop!!! :D

    I can so relate to this piece,

    Congratulations on the win, well deserved missy

    Into my favourites...

    Nominated!!!

    • 4 years ago

      by Meme

      Ohh thanks a lot sweetie.
      :)

  • 4 years ago

    by Amreen

    Every word carries beautiful imagery and a story to share!

    I am mesmerized by the poem!

    Keep writing:)

    Nominated!!

    • 4 years ago

      by Meme

      Thanks sweetie :)

  • 4 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Well, I was instantly struck when I read this, it has that tone of survival and strength that I've found myself penning lately, yet you did it perfectly, the tone was gentle, the imagery was captivating and beautifully worded, the whole thing just spoke volumes about life and never letting it drag you down, always breathing because life is worth living...this was just beautiful and that's why it won the challenge!

  • 4 years ago

    by Karla

    The ending is perfect. Lovely piece, Meme!

    • 4 years ago

      by Meme

      Thanks Karla :)

  • 4 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Meme- This piece truly gave me goosebumps, really adore the format of elegant repetative tone of the word "breathe"- What I like about it so much is, it made me feel as I read it of rain actually falling down on my face... it was calming... beautiful poem!!

  • 4 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Wow I love this poem... the opening stanza was my favorite part. It was so original. I love the idea of trying to catch raindrops. It was beautiful. I love the repetition of 'breathe' it really emphasized the positivity you were trying to portray.

    Amazingggg poem <333

  • 4 years ago

    by Yatubeera Resty

    Simply put yet so relaxing....
    You remind me of a friend's words, " with every breath, you can be anytig you will"
    Love ending lines, " ...a part of nature orchestra...."

  • 4 years ago

    by Skyfire

    Loved the way the last few stanzas had the feel of taking an actual breath! You really captured the ebb and flow of it. Beautiful!