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I'm so happy this piece won... Whoop!!! :D

I can so relate to this piece,

Congratulations on the win, well deserved missy

Into my favourites...

Nominated!!!

Every word carries beautiful imagery and a story to share!

I am mesmerized by the poem!

Keep writing:)

Nominated!!

Well, I was instantly struck when I read this, it has that tone of survival and strength that I've found myself penning lately, yet you did it perfectly, the tone was gentle, the imagery was captivating and beautifully worded, the whole thing just spoke volumes about life and never letting it drag you down, always breathing because life is worth living...this was just beautiful and that's why it won the challenge!

The ending is perfect. Lovely piece, Meme!

Meme- This piece truly gave me goosebumps, really adore the format of elegant repetative tone of the word "breathe"- What I like about it so much is, it made me feel as I read it of rain actually falling down on my face... it was calming... beautiful poem!!

Wow I love this poem... the opening stanza was my favorite part. It was so original. I love the idea of trying to catch raindrops. It was beautiful. I love the repetition of 'breathe' it really emphasized the positivity you were trying to portray.

Amazingggg poem <333

Simply put yet so relaxing....
You remind me of a friend's words, " with every breath, you can be anytig you will"
Love ending lines, " ...a part of nature orchestra...."

Loved the way the last few stanzas had the feel of taking an actual breath! You really captured the ebb and flow of it. Beautiful!