Well, I was instantly struck when I read this, it has that tone of survival and strength that I've found myself penning lately, yet you did it perfectly, the tone was gentle, the imagery was captivating and beautifully worded, the whole thing just spoke volumes about life and never letting it drag you down, always breathing because life is worth living...this was just beautiful and that's why it won the challenge!
Meme- This piece truly gave me goosebumps, really adore the format of elegant repetative tone of the word "breathe"- What I like about it so much is, it made me feel as I read it of rain actually falling down on my face... it was calming... beautiful poem!!
Wow I love this poem... the opening stanza was my favorite part. It was so original. I love the idea of trying to catch raindrops. It was beautiful. I love the repetition of 'breathe' it really emphasized the positivity you were trying to portray.