Comments : A mom?

  • 5 years ago

    by Something Diabolical

    A very good piece, I feel the same about my mother so I can relate.

    Keep it up!

  • 5 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This is a very powerful poem direct and straight to the point of the message well delivered. Emotional and not forced I would not change a thing

  • 5 years ago

    by Bryana Thomas

    I feel the same ugh mothers

  • 5 years ago

    by ThebutterfliesMuse

    I like this poem so sad though and I can relate sadly my parents I dont have a great relationship with. One flaw in the fifth line was should be were 5/5

  • 5 years ago

    by Amreen

    A very emotional piece indeed. Sometimes its difficult to make people understand our happiness and bad times. But I really hope your bond will get on better one day with your mom. Your longing for the mom-bond is evident here.

    Good piece:)

    Keep writing:))

  • 5 years ago

    by WintersAngel

    Very sad and relatable.

  • 5 years ago

    by Curtis Young

    I feel the same way with my mother