Whoooaaa Amreen I had no idea you wrote this, I thought Andrea did.
This is totally beautifully. I think you set the tone for a sonnet beautifully!
I cant say I've seen one like this before! You combined love with poetry, and formed it into a sonney. Not only was it about love, but the end was turned into losing what you thought was perfect.... Impressive.
I'm usually pretty good at guessing who wrote what in challenges because everyone's style is so different, but I was wrong in this case! lol I truly love this, it's so unique... you really pulled it off nicely! :)
This relationship started off well, you began penning your journey together, your sonnet... but only in the end for it to be incomplete due to him not doing his part in the relationship, leaving a blank page when it should have been filled with love.
Beautiful piece, Amreen! I'm always a fan of your work. <3