Comments : The Incomplete Sonnet...

  • 5 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Whoooaaa Amreen I had no idea you wrote this, I thought Andrea did.

    This is totally beautifully. I think you set the tone for a sonnet beautifully!

    I cant say I've seen one like this before! You combined love with poetry, and formed it into a sonney. Not only was it about love, but the end was turned into losing what you thought was perfect.... Impressive.

    Well done girly.

    I just adore the piece,

    • 5 years ago

      by Amreen

      Thank you Chels for your comment.... Means a lot:)

  • 5 years ago

    by Xandra

    This is so beautiful and so well composed! I loved it!

  • 5 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    I'm usually pretty good at guessing who wrote what in challenges because everyone's style is so different, but I was wrong in this case! lol I truly love this, it's so unique... you really pulled it off nicely! :)

    This relationship started off well, you began penning your journey together, your sonnet... but only in the end for it to be incomplete due to him not doing his part in the relationship, leaving a blank page when it should have been filled with love.

    Beautiful piece, Amreen! I'm always a fan of your work. <3

  • 4 years ago

    by Love Fallacy

    Very nice. I know you have read some of my poetry and can tell I like to rhyme a lot. Reading your poetry is a nice change of pace from the rhyming themes of mine. Nice job

  • 4 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    I like how you have weaved form poetry and love is indeed a sonnet which flows with
    thoughts and emotions..nice read.

  • 4 years ago

    by DarkLight

    I avnt read meaningful piece fr a very long time.goid wording