The imagery in this is amazing and the story is a beautiful one. It really flows well. Very interesting and I like the ending a lot. You leave it open, not giving the reader the answer to the question. Nice twist and it keeps the holding on to it. Nicely done.

Wow two words LOVE IT!!

Wow!!! The imagery in this poem of yours is fantastic!!! I love it!!! You kept the reader wondering if what the answer to the question would be. I like that. It certainly is a new twist. I too, loved the ending. Please keep writing; as I look forward to reading many, many more of your poems. And I invite you to read mine as well and feel free to comment and give me some advice (if needed of how I may need to improve on some of them). I look forward to hearing from you and any suggestions that you may have regarding any of my poems. Take care and happy writing!!! :)

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