Comments : Immortal Kiss

  • 5 years ago

    by Jack Crimson Nightengale

    I like this. A few spelling errors but nothing really major. I like the dark feeling this one carries. That spine tingling chill, that gust of cold wind that snatcjes your breath. Great job

  • 8 months ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Vampires, I love their passion. You have obviously read a lot of books as the information in this poem is extensive and beautiful.

    Thank you for sharing.

    • I just seen this thank you so much but to be honest when I wrote this I really didn't know much about vampires sometime when I'm alone or sad is when I write the best things just come to me kind of like an old memories sometimes it feel real