Comments : Immortal Kiss

  • 4 years ago

    by Jack Crimson Nightengale

    I like this. A few spelling errors but nothing really major. I like the dark feeling this one carries. That spine tingling chill, that gust of cold wind that snatcjes your breath. Great job

  • 2 days ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Vampires, I love their passion. You have obviously read a lot of books as the information in this poem is extensive and beautiful.

    Thank you for sharing.