Comments : A Test in Life ( Challenge from ADreamer )

  • 10 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Ohhh, I did enjoy this very much. You have made
    good use with the words given making this read a memorable one!

    Shield in a tower
    that stretches thoughts
    from blades of grass to blades of grass
    into a secret muse,
    I call the sky:

    ^^I like the imagery here. There is a soothing tone to it which brings on a smile.

    The overflow of bitter superstition
    built brick by brick
    by an attention seeker,
    a puppy love,
    that made out of my mind
    an architecture,

    ^^This one stood out for me, not sure why, maybe because of the various images of a new love.

    All in all liked this read :)

  • 10 years ago

    by Midnight Sky

    You are a good poet good joooob here