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by Everlasting Feb 11, 2014
Life, society /
I've always wonder - it has always been
a part of me, wondering that is. About
existence. . . with my eyes closed, I see
you - black. I rub my eyelids, I see you -
colorful. And within a moment, I stretch
my arms as wide as open, I feel you -
the breeze. I embrace my back as tight as
possible, I feel you - my shoulder blades.
And I wonder, if I open my eyes, will I still
see you? Will I still feel you?
I was six, or ten, not sure. It's been a while.
Time passed through my bones. It stretched
them. It hurt. It hurts to grow. So many
changes. My sight got blur, more blur. I see
but I don't. Turtles walk slow. People walk
fast. Dogs run. No wonder some live ages
while others live until they die.. ha! Ironic,
life is ironic, isn't? I wonder,
if I close my eyes, will I still see you? Will I still
feel you? like when I was six, or ten, not sure,
it's been a while. Time passed through me,
it gave me a shape of an hourglass.
No wonder a few men called woman a time passed...
They think they hold our time, not sure why,
the hourglass? They think they can flip up us
around? They think they can control us?
Can anyone control time? Time passed
through me, I was six, or ten, not sure,
it's been a while. But If I open my eyes,
will I still see you? Will I still feel you?
Or will it be like back then, when I was six,
or ten, not sure, but I closed them, and I saw
you - black. I rubbed my eyelids, I saw you -
colorful. And then I opened my eyes
to closed them again and see you,
but there was nothing.Written by: L.L
Feb 11, 2014 - 12:34 am
Very nice poem
by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist
lucky me I read this one. .. I like it even the repetition of some lines making this write sounds like a song. ...I like the imaginary and the emotion. ...you need to close your eyes just to see him. ..damn I can relate to this one. ..
Well done as always Luce
Thank you Gel
Luce this is freaking awesome, I think one of my favourite from you, I love the voice in this and Ben is right the spacing in this really help add to the feeling to it.
Added to favourites, epic.
Thank you Ben
by The Po whet
Beautifully written, these lines got my attention and left me with a smile. "Turtles walk slowly, people walk fast, dogs run/no wonder some live for ages while some live until they die.
Thanks The Po Whet
Lucero this is really unique and beautifully written. I love the spacing as it gives the piece an extra kick (not that it needed 1)
A wondering mind is a beautiful one. ..
Thank you Em
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