Comments : A Time to Rewind

  • 3 years ago

    by Midnight Sky

    Lot of emotion in sadness in here great job

  • 2 years ago

    by Wicked Ways

    Woahhh I love every part of this I could honestly tell that you really laid it all out for this poem and really shows , the depth of sorrow in this poem speaks for itself I really feel the vulnerability in this so much it makes me a little vulnerable but I guess that's what happens when u read a poem u relate so well too. love the strength I read in the end great way to end this poem :)

  • 2 years ago

    by La Reina De Corazones

    I wanted to cry to be honest. This hit close to home, except I was never pregnant and I never heard God's voice, but he did save my life when I was about die in my own way. I admit this is beautiful, I would go back to check the grammar, some parts didn't quite fit, the spelling was fine, but some parts just were no lol please don't take offence.

    -Mori