Comments : Two Bottles, Two Bottles

  • 4 years ago

    by Beautiful Soul

    Wow! This poem holds a lot you can think about. I really don't know how to comment this but I think whatyou aare talking about is missing this person you used to love. And you are drinking to numb the leftover feelings you have for him. And after you lost him your life turned for the worse. There is a lot of sadness here. Though I can see why you put it in the life category. Grief is a very hard thing to overcome and people use a lot of ways to cope. The metaphors here are very well written. Another thing I thought is the alcohol is making your mind drift and imagine what is was like to feel happy. Anyways this really does show alcohol can mess up your mind. Great write

  • 4 years ago

    by Alanis

    This is realy a poem worth reading. I love the vivid picture and the descriptiveness that it withholds. Nominated

  • 4 years ago

    by Steven Croat

    I love how you wrote it...
    This is a great poem whith many depths!