Comments : A Blender, a Blender it is

  • 10 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    This made me smile, and I like the little rap beat that kicks in when I am reading it, I was making up a little tune to it.

    The creativity is good here with the blender in the kitchen, I actually thought you were going to just write about this blender and not add anything else in, but you added in some emotion, and perhaps a love relationship.

    Nice work. Different to read.

  • 9 years ago

    by gumshuda

    Oh I should say...What an experiment!
    The experiment part makes me think...what are you experimenting with???This type of poem??A feeling??? Or some dish in the kitchen???

    But truthfully, I'm suddenly falling in love with all your poems and how unique and different they are..not to forget the way you rhyme everything.It's just beautiful.

    And oh lol...this line made me laugh :

    "like the moles in my skin - the ones you patrol
    like a police man in the mall,"

    oh, another wonderful write.

    • 9 years ago

      by Everlasting

      I was experimenting with the sound. With the rhythm. And if I could turn the poem into a different version of rap.

  • 9 years ago

    by alka mendiratta

    Enjoyed the rap fully :)