Comments : The Last Thing

  • 2 years ago

    by lemmemaskmyhorror

    Great piece, love it ...

  • 2 years ago

    by Dancing Rivers

    This is beautiful.it could actually be a song, there's a gentle but sad melody that rings as I read these words,I love how there was a sort of paradox in the poem, it seems as though you're killing the memory of that person, that girl that you loved, but you're really killing yourself.I can really relate to this, the deadness,I lie the metaphor of the tombstone it's stunning.

    • 2 years ago

      by Mihir Deshmukh

      Thank you this one is the first piece I have written for myself so it is a pretty special one and I see you like it too so it should be good.