Comments : Fibonacci code, follow me down; (Senyru)

  • 4 years ago

    by WW

    Rad! Very beautiful. I did a poem like this called magazine that follows this sequence. I like yours better though. 5/5

  • 4 years ago

    by Everlasting

    For some unknown reason, I'm good at spotting typo's in others people's poems but not on my own :?

    , and will take thier toll."

    ^ is it thier or their?

    I have to read about the fibonacci code, I'm clueless.

  • 4 years ago

    by BlueJay

    This is a very unique piece and i love the imagery that you used. very well penned and very creative use of format! Wonderfully done.

  • 3 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A very clever little piece, beautifully structured.