I really like this piece of poetry as well! So much emotion, and so much love!

You were becoming essential,
More essential than diamond and gold
I was very ready, your hand to hold.
Loving you, caring you and
Clinging with you only, I wanted to get old.

that would be my favorite part! Again, another great write! good job! 5/5

*~BrittBratt~*

The third stanza says it all and shows how important this love is for you whilst the last one rejoices in the relationship of this new found love...nice read :)

Wow, this brought back some old memories. painful but never the less great job!