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  • 2 years ago

    by Rania Moallem

    WAW! This was after 6 years ? I actually thought it was even more coherent than the ones I've read earlier, taking into consideration that they were perfect.

    This is an amazing poem, it is nailed! The scheme, the phrasing, the length, pace, meaning, content; one full package!

    When I saw the title, I thought it was a United Nation's thing, UN poem or something. I actually find it was eye catching that you decided to title it that way, having the un prefix in most of your double liners.

    What a great piece of all the things one would miss-out.
    Thoought provoking and added to my favorite, really sad I didnt see this earlier.