I'm not a fan of religion in general, but I do enjoy it when I read a different-veined piece of work that shows another aspect of religion and faith. This is a brilliantly executed piece. The fact that you had such a common rhyme scheme and yet still shared the message in such a profound manner shows your skill as a poet, you had my interest from start to finish. Brilliant.
Good poem...what a beautiful description of a human's body! Uhhhmmm, can I please ask you something? Do poems with a heart on the side of the titles mean the poems are going to be nominated? Pls reply here asap...thanx a bunch!
This really speaks to ones soul, for who are we without GOD?? No one. HE is the essence of mankind, who is made in HIS image. We are the awe inspiring reality of what GOD wanted but what he is still busy completeing.