I'm not a fan of religion in general, but I do enjoy it when I read a different-veined piece of work that shows another aspect of religion and faith. This is a brilliantly executed piece. The fact that you had such a common rhyme scheme and yet still shared the message in such a profound manner shows your skill as a poet, you had my interest from start to finish. Brilliant.
Good poem...what a beautiful description of a human's body! Uhhhmmm, can I please ask you something? Do poems with a heart on the side of the titles mean the poems are going to be nominated? Pls reply here asap...thanx a bunch!