Comments : TIME:

  • 2 years ago

    by Ren

    This is such a refreshing piece that captures the essence of time and causes an almost nostalgic realization...
    I've tried to write poems about time before, and have never been able to bring to life the ever ticking hands of time like you have.
    Very wonderfully written with a great flow and vivid imagery.
    It also serves as a gentle reminder to slow down, don't sweat the small stuff, and live it up while you can.
    "So live laugh and love, with each ticking hand, and enjoy your share, for as long as you can"
    No words truer than that line right there :)
    Take care!

  • 1 year ago

    by Meena Krish

    So very true, Time waits for no one and we have to make
    use of it wisely and for some there are not enough time.
    Well penned!

    • 1 year ago

      by Scott Cole

      Thanks that was one of my older poems when I was just getting started. I'm glad they still bring pleasure to listening ears...