This is such a refreshing piece that captures the essence of time and causes an almost nostalgic realization...
I've tried to write poems about time before, and have never been able to bring to life the ever ticking hands of time like you have.
Very wonderfully written with a great flow and vivid imagery.
It also serves as a gentle reminder to slow down, don't sweat the small stuff, and live it up while you can.
"So live laugh and love, with each ticking hand, and enjoy your share, for as long as you can"
No words truer than that line right there :)