Comments : A Deathly New Year

  • 3 years ago

    by - Mr. Darcy


    This poem was crying out like the words it contained. The theme of being broken is one many of us can relate to. I like the idea of just being a shattered piece left over following a fall. This portrays well the reduced feeling we get when when suffering an emotional trauma.

    Well done on this and I hope you feel much better now.

    Take care.


    • 3 years ago

      by Someone Invisible

      Yes my name is Kia.
      Thank you, i was very raw while i was writting this. I am feeling better. I thank you kindly for the review. :)
      I hope youre doing well and have a wonderful day.

  • 3 years ago

    by Em

    Wow, this is deep and relatable in many ways.

    I have been kicked down and broken many times but the key is not to stay down for long. Pick yourself up, brush yourself off and move on.

    (hugs) Em

    • 3 years ago

      by Someone Invisible

      Im sorry you were able to relate to this. Its a sad piece of work of mine and i never like to hear someone has been in this position before. Thank you for the review however. :)

  • 2 years ago

    by Euphanasia

    Sh!t that was sad. Peace be with you always friend.
    Write on...