Comments : What is Love??? (English sonnet)

  • 3 years ago

    by GB

    As I read many divine English sonnets of yours, I can say that it's not the prettiest, still very neatly penned.

    The ability to maintain the 10 syllable count in harmony with smooth rhyming scheme in of itself a great work. I think it's very confusing for myself, writing many lines of the same syllable count.

    Thank you for sharing, always a pleasure.

    • 3 years ago

      by Robert Gardiner

      When I first wrote it GB. I felt it lack the beauty, of which I'm enamored and strive to write with, but because it spoke truth and said something of consequence. I felt I need it to keep it and give it life. It might lack the classic beauty, I usually strive for, but it has a message some need to here.

  • 3 years ago

    by Meme

    Best sonnet I read in here. You nailed the meaning behind. It is full of power in expressing what love should be like.
    " Love should be, a mutually shared thing." so true, it cant be love when the other side is not on the same page. It should be nurtured by two for it to become real; for it to survive.

    A piece I know I will visit more often.

    Thank you for sharing it!