Comments : Soul of a Dead Star Waltz (shape poem)

  • 2 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    A lifeless star has been given a feeling which still lives on and remembered...I feel that sadness penned between the lines...touching.

  • 2 years ago

    by Poetess

    Absolutely beautiful.

  • 2 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Now that you mentioned that its a shape poem have been sitting back and trying to figure this shape out....kinda looks like an hour glass or a rocket or maybe I'm wrong.

    Nonetheless Congrats on the win!!

    • 2 years ago

      by Larry Chamberlin

      My intent was to depict Tightening and Stretching as in a dance where the partners rhythmically approach and pull away.

  • 2 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Judging Comment

    When a person loves their dancing partner with heart and soul, it can make a heart feel like they are less than the other. because the love for the other rises so high, however the joys overcome the insecurities within and happiness prevails... I may be way off on my amaryllis of this poem by Larry, but it's they way I felt while reading.

    Powerful and explosive poem by Larry this week!