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by Baby Rainbow
This poem has such good potential, the meaning and wording is great, but I would advise changing the layout, and fixing the punctuation errors for your readers to make sense of the poem better.
I was typing it on an insanely old phone, I could not see the painful structure until now.
by cassie hughes
Wow, this is such a great piece. Full of emotion, the wording is just perfect and I love the line "Like teardrop needles in my spine." You have obviously had a chance to play with this since Saffie commented because I found it flowed beautifully.
Yes I did. XD Thank you. :)
by Shark Puncher
Well written, miss. :)
The word play is great in this one.
Thank you! ^-^
Thank you. :))
Fantastically written and wonderful imagery