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  • 2 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Excellent, powerful write. "You can't let the demons think they've won" - superb line - I'll take that one with me.

  • 2 years ago

    by Dancing Rivers

    Erm... ima tad confused, this piece was brilliantly written with many powerful portions, yet the threads were sort of like holey lace, didnt really have a solid connection, there was a connection, but it was a tad lacey, but bare in mind that lace is beautiful as was this poem ;)