Comments : The road.

  • 2 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    This is so true Ken! Sometimes I dream of losing someone in my sleep and when I wake, the relief is indescribable! Dreams can steal some very important things from you!
    Excellent write, Ken.

  • 2 years ago

    by CRAFTY KEN

    Thanks Ben, I think sometimes what you fear in the day may come back to haunt you at night in your dreams as you said. I also had those experiences with much relief when my eyes open. I thought you would like the surprise ending that from the beginning he was dreaming. Regards, Ken

  • 2 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Often in my dreams I've lost someone dear to me and then when I woke up it still seemed so real. I think dealing with daily troubles haunt us at night. Ken you did a beautiful job with this poem. Add to my fav

    • 2 years ago

      by CRAFTY KEN

      Thanks Dag, I have some of your poems in my favorites also. I love your remarks especially from you with your great talent!

      Ken

  • 2 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    Amazing!

    Perfect spacing! beautiful to look at and wonderful to read. It's filled with emotion and takes the reader on a journey with you to how it felt to have such a nightmare. Unpredictable in every part.

    5/5 :)

    • 2 years ago

      by CRAFTY KEN

      Thank you, I always appreciate your comments!

      Ken