Hello,

this is superb, a nugget of brilliance. A moment captured and polished into a real gem.

Nominated.

Take care,

Michael

Freaking awesome poem. The 1st three lines are breath taking

the last three lines are mind blowing. I just love love this piece. I wish I can put it in a frame and read it every day.

Awesome wording. The climax...in these few seconds..

this is going to be my favorite poem for a long time now.
Thank you for writing it.