Comments : NOM NOM NOM

  • 2 years ago

    by Dancing Rivers

    Brilliant!

  • 2 years ago

    by Darren

    Clever to throw a little bit of loop poetry in there at the end.

    love all the magic as well

    This is one of those poems I enjoy where we take the stuffy poetry form and rules book and flush it down the bog.

    The title was interesting, linked nicely at the end.

    good poem

    I enjoyed reading this.

    • 1 year ago

      by Alaskan Husky

      I really appreciate the time you took to comment...thank you!

  • 1 year ago

    by Em

    The title intrigued me but I must admit when I first started reading the poem I though why what title until I got to the end, nicely linked.

    Your flow is good and as Darren said the loop poetry at the end was good.

    Em