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by Dancing Rivers
by Alaskan Husky
Thanks I was just havin some fun.
Clever to throw a little bit of loop poetry in there at the end.
love all the magic as well
This is one of those poems I enjoy where we take the stuffy poetry form and rules book and flush it down the bog.
The title was interesting, linked nicely at the end.
I enjoyed reading this.
I really appreciate the time you took to comment...thank you!
The title intrigued me but I must admit when I first started reading the poem I though why what title until I got to the end, nicely linked.
Your flow is good and as Darren said the loop poetry at the end was good.