Jesus I thought I was reading a medical brochure, you definitely painted a vivid picture after i got out the ole oxford and figured out what the hell you were saying, seriously I'm too damn old to go to college just to read a poem....ha ha, much enjoyed, you old bag
another win and another poem. This time a very different style. It reminded me of walking around a DIY store on a Saturday choosing paint from a paint chart.
all these and more need descriptions to paint a picture of them. The colours are your tools and the tools of poetry craft; a craft we can all relate to. It is so lovely to see a dedication to imagery of nature. Now, that is something we can all agree on is lovely.