Comments : Sparklish

  • 8 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Snow has a beauty of its own to captures one's heart and mind; even though she brings on such icy temperatures the sparkles of her is simply elegant.

    As for the read I like how you have started each stanza with one word and then expanding on it. The imagery is very lively and it sculpts a picture in the reader's mind..nice read :)

    • 8 years ago

      by yogi73

      Thanks, Meena!

      Hope you are well.

      zach

  • 8 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello,

    Congratulations...

    You certainly have a unique way with words. Your seasonal descriptions brought smiles at times and expressions of thoughtful contemplation.

    Wonderful work.

    Well done.

    Michael

    • 8 years ago

      by yogi73

      Thank you very much

      zach

  • 8 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Congrats on this well deserved Win!! :)

  • 8 years ago

    by PETER BAJEH

    I read it more than twice and its wow.congrats!

  • 8 years ago

    by Bob Shank

    A terrific piece, breath taking scenario you've painted here...congrats on the win.

  • 6 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Wow...what a beautiful, calming read! Lovely use of words and great imagery. I love the title, too. Great write!