I am a big fan of repetition in poems - I find it very power, and your work here is not exception. Cheers to beating alcoholism; cheers to succumbing to it.

Hello,

I love the message. The message about the first step to beating alcoholism is admitting to have an addiction. The first step is the hardest.

I like the format, rhyme and repetition of 'Im one step away from...' this helped pound the emotional struggle with denial and the cusp of admission real.

Well done,

Take care,

Michael