Comments : Within it

  • 2 years ago

    by hiraeth

    Possible typo ? "she is the radiant is", did you mean "she is the radiance" or am I misreading it?

    • 2 years ago

      by Karla

      Nah i've written what i meant:
      she's the radiant is.

      i guess it doen't make sense in english.i don't know what to do.

  • 2 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Judging comment

    You can't help but get swept away with the words Karla writes.

    she has such an elegant way about her writing. this poem is very uplifting and stylish.

    I do want to highlight on a line if I may:

    "she is the radiant is" <--- within the English language this does look like a typo, however as Karla pointed out it is exactly what she meant it to be.

    I for one: enjoyed this line, because it so powerfully displays the power of the second stanza... "Is" becomes the power statement, Is and will always be radiant... this is how I interpreted this line... to me, it makes this poem stand out about the rest! just beautiful!!