Comments : Take a Piece of My Life

  • 1 year ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Angie this is amazing. Very visual.
    File me under my current name something that is always difficult for women whether or not to keep their name or take another's.

    Pulling a little of you away at a time taking that part of you away. Masking your face in lipstick hiding from the day its a very emotional poem losing yourself so deeply it has so much depth and made me feel so sad reading it. Milly xx

  • 1 year ago

    by Ben Pickard

    This is a wonderful piece of vivid writing that conjures so much imagery and emotion as its read. I love the little infusions of rhyme that speckle this piece here and there.

    Excellent.

  • 1 year ago

    by Rsan

    The rhyme you have here is really something.Often looming here and there ,it makes one to continue reading the poem throughout. With the imagery you have here it creates a perfect blend of poetry. Fantastic piece,it really is.

    Rsan

  • 1 year ago

    by Rsan

    Just heart-pleasing'

  • 1 year ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    This is such a beautiful write with great emotions. Love it. Excellent. Take care

    • 1 year ago

      by AngelaLuisaCory

      I really appreciate your lovely comments everyone.

  • 1 year ago

    by Em

    A very vivid piece with plenty imagery and emotion throughout.

    Take care, Em

  • 1 year ago

    by Brenda

    Beautiful write, I love the imagery it displays-