Angie this is amazing. Very visual.
File me under my current name something that is always difficult for women whether or not to keep their name or take another's.
Pulling a little of you away at a time taking that part of you away. Masking your face in lipstick hiding from the day its a very emotional poem losing yourself so deeply it has so much depth and made me feel so sad reading it. Milly xx
1 year ago
by Ben Pickard
This is a wonderful piece of vivid writing that conjures so much imagery and emotion as its read. I love the little infusions of rhyme that speckle this piece here and there.
The rhyme you have here is really something.Often looming here and there ,it makes one to continue reading the poem throughout. With the imagery you have here it creates a perfect blend of poetry. Fantastic piece,it really is.