A poem full of wisdom that anyone who feels the effects of loneliness would do well to take not of.

SL

It's an excellent poem, aside from the forced ending. I loved the meaning behind it, and the fact that everything you say is true-- the cure to loneliness is simply finding someone else to be a distracted sort of lonely with.

I would suggest changing at least the last line, because it does not do the poem justice :P I would suggest "with whom to share our life.", but there are plenty of options :)

Thanks for writing this, it shall go in my favorites for when I need reminding of the frivolous nature of loneliness.

5/5
IdTakeABulletForYou

Love that it ends on a light note.