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by Mahal Ko Kuya Ko
Beautiful! Beautiful! Your pieces are always emotion-filled, full of wonderful imagery, and I love that they are nature poems. You write effortlessly beautiful!
Beautiful imagery, emotion filled piece.
by - Mr. Darcy
lovely and vivid descriptions here and from the off.
The image of 'entrails being sucked by grief' is superb - the simile of grief making you feel wretched is effective.
'...trim humiliation' another superb term - trying to regain control in front of others.
'inner serenade' - I take this as an inner happiness, inner love perhaps.
'dipping fingers in blood' - using the pain to write what is sometimes too hard to say.
I wish I knew where the liars lived so I could give them a wide berth, but those masks make them look like you and me.
Great concept and excellently executed.
Well done and all the best.