Beautiful! Beautiful! Your pieces are always emotion-filled, full of wonderful imagery, and I love that they are nature poems. You write effortlessly beautiful!

--- MKKK

Beautiful imagery, emotion filled piece.

Em

Hello Satish,

lovely and vivid descriptions here and from the off.

The image of 'entrails being sucked by grief' is superb - the simile of grief making you feel wretched is effective.

'...trim humiliation' another superb term - trying to regain control in front of others.

'inner serenade' - I take this as an inner happiness, inner love perhaps.

'dipping fingers in blood' - using the pain to write what is sometimes too hard to say.

I wish I knew where the liars lived so I could give them a wide berth, but those masks make them look like you and me.

Great concept and excellently executed.

Well done and all the best.

Take care,

Michael