I really like the way you write-wonderful!

Dang...

Yakari, I've said it before and I'll say it again and again, i always look forward when I see your name pop up on my news feed thing that you've posted another piece because your pieces are always raw, unique and definitely gets the reader thinking. I often wonder if your pieces are literal or not (as I know some are 'people watching' pieces and other most likely are.)
Anyway, to this piece it's another one of your unique styled pieces that fits perfectly together in every way and reads so smooth. My only problem was that it was just like bang, bang, bang then over (in a good way) so had to read it thrice lol and each time I found something else I liked about it which is unusual with things I read.

Take care, Em

You're so sweet em! i don't deserve it! <3

Love it