Comments : The Conqueror

  • 1 year ago

    by William Mae

    Wow that's and amazing write, it was perfect

  • 1 year ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Truly enjoyed reading.

  • 1 year ago

    by Em

    Meena, such a beautiful and inspirational write. I think most women want their knight in shining armour, their tall dark and handsome man but in reality what we need is someone who treats us right, someone who knows us inside and out and you portrayed this well (goes for men too mind)

    I've come past wanting and yearning
    for a tall, dark and handsome man,
    I've gone past dreaming and crying
    for my heart to be filled with care
    since the moment my stubborn eyes
    opened to what I had in front
    of me!
    A very powerful opening, one which many women can relate too, wanting their tall dark handsome guy but then realising that those aren't what they expect but that what's in front of them is better than anything they could dream of.

    I have a man who fills my heart
    without having me to explain,
    I have a real life hero who
    makes me smile with just a hello;
    I love this part because you have realised that what's in front of you (as I said earlier) is better than any man that you could ever dream of and it's good that you have come to that realisation because the knight in shining armour or tall, dark, handsome man in this case could be a toad in a mask lol

    What more, what more do I need now
    when I have heaven in my arms
    who reads me like a book and knows
    all my moods to quell my blizzards;
    I love the imagery here of this man knowing you inside out, sitting down and reading you like a book and being able to detect your chance in moods and of course know everything about the moods in question; not often do we find men like this.

    He's the man I always needed
    he is all that I wanted-the
    valiant knight who has conquered
    this lady tempest!
    I had to laugh at this because us women do have some moods don't we and to find a man who can conquer us as a woman are definitely keepers.
    A thoroughly enjoyable read by you as always.
    Nominated, take care.

  • 1 year ago

    by Brenda

    Just beautiful! It's so awesome when you finally meet that one. You know you've come home and the journey is over. I'm so happy for you.

  • 1 year ago

    by Milly Hayward

    I think a lot of women can relate to the sentiment in this lovely poem. A knight in shining armour who can cope with women's moods is what most women want :) Milly x