Comments : You Don't Kiss me Goodnight

  • 1 year ago

    by Augustus Black

    I think this write of yours is truely amazing. You are very talented in writing love poems and I think it's great. Rhyming and flow is very fantastic. Every stanza is singing a great meaning of love which is coming from the depth of your heart. I like it..... oh! Lovers really like their partners write poem for them.

    Well done. Keep on going.

  • 1 year ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Thank you Augustus. I love writing when I'm happy , hurt or angry. .. It let me described the feeling that I wanted to evoke...Thanks for the good feedback and for your time reading this

    Gel

  • 1 year ago

    by Em

    Gel, this is absolutely stunning and it all too relatable for me as I believe many others would be able to relate to it.
    Love (I guess) can be so beautiful yet destroying too.

    All the best and well done on yet another fab write.
    Em

  • 9 months ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Hello Gel,

    This is so sad. I can't imagine anyone choosing a pillow over you. Lucky pillow that's what I say! Lol

    My favourite verse is this one:

    You don't kiss me goodnight,
    It hurts me more and more.
    You don't kiss me goodnight
    It just got my heart tore
    ^
    Feeling unloved/ wanted is the ultimate rejection.

    I realise this poem was written 6 years ago, and now you are happy. It just shows you that love works out in the end.

    Take care,

    Michael x

  • 9 months ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Gel, a lady of your calibre can have your pick of men.

  • 6 months ago

    by DarkLight

    The title caught my eyes, and for site it's well expressed.
    Very original.