Comments : Forever Love (Sedoka type)

  • 1 year ago

    by Em

    Michael this is absolutely beautiful. The words you use are so authentic and majestic. That is all.


  • 1 year ago

    by Ben Pickard


    Thank you. :)

    Wonderful, flowing work.

  • 1 year ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Woo oohhh..Sir Michael the layout is so cute... and the content was lovely..

    I like the lapping tide of love.
    you have a good Imagination sir, nice Imaginary...


  • 1 year ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck


    What an excellent poem, Michael!! So romantic and so well thought out.

    Moonlight sails across
    Your flowing feminine frame
    Like a lapping tide of love.

    This has such a strong connotation of secure and everlasting commitment, very deep sentiments portrayed here...

    These eyes feel your pulse,
    beating iambic rhythm,
    singing an endless sonnet.

    When in love, the normal things become magical, like the heart of the other beating.

    This is the kind of verse that should be read out loud at a wedding, so beautifully done :-)

    (((hugs))) xx Ingrid

  • 1 year ago

    by Mayday

    Beautiful and romantic ^_^ You captured a moment, here. I like this!


  • 1 year ago

    by Brenda

    Michael, what a beautiful love poems! It flows so smoothly.