Comments : Forever Love (Sedoka type)

  • 1 year ago

    by Em

    Michael this is absolutely beautiful. The words you use are so authentic and majestic. That is all.

    Em

  • 1 year ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Michael,

    Thank you. :)

    Wonderful, flowing work.

  • 1 year ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Woo oohhh..Sir Michael the layout is so cute... and the content was lovely..

    I like the lapping tide of love.
    you have a good Imagination sir, nice Imaginary...

    Gel

  • 1 year ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    Wow, and....wow!

    What an excellent poem, Michael!! So romantic and so well thought out.

    Moonlight sails across
    Your flowing feminine frame
    Like a lapping tide of love.

    ^^^
    This has such a strong connotation of secure and everlasting commitment, very deep sentiments portrayed here...

    These eyes feel your pulse,
    beating iambic rhythm,
    singing an endless sonnet.

    ^^^
    When in love, the normal things become magical, like the heart of the other beating.

    This is the kind of verse that should be read out loud at a wedding, so beautifully done :-)

    (((hugs))) xx Ingrid

  • 1 year ago

    by Mayday

    Beautiful and romantic ^_^ You captured a moment, here. I like this!

    5/5

  • 1 year ago

    by Brenda

    Michael, what a beautiful love poems! It flows so smoothly.