Comments : Grace Of Our Ages

  • 1 year ago

    by Mary

    William,
    This is truly a brilliant write. Extremely clever and well written. This was so well thought out. I really enjoyed this piece.
    Take care

    • 1 year ago

      by William Mae

      Thank you so much Mary, I realized the length would discourage many from reading or even enjoying but I wrote it to tell a story. And a story for me at least takes more then 3 to 4 stanzas. I'm glad there are some who enjoyed it.

  • 1 year ago

    by Em

    This is amazing and will be getting nominated by Mr.. It may have been long but it kept me entertained and interested al the way through, well done.
    Em

  • 1 year ago

    by Crystal

    You are a very talented writer. I enjoyed reading this.

  • 1 year ago

    by Ben Pickard

    William,

    As the other comments, this is long, but it needs to be to relate the story properly, as you point out.
    This held my interest throughout in its originality and flowing rhyme.

    Excellent stuff - nominated.

    Ben

  • 1 year ago

    by Meena Krish

    No matter the time or the years or the births that have lived, passed and died when hearts know their soul mates they somehow keep coming together again and again...nicely penned.

    Nominated!