Comments : Torment

  • 10 months ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Aww Gem you made it short. ... I read this on wattpad and it's really amazing. ...I like the graphic visuals you wanted to portray. ..The gunshots and the blood. .. I liked it. .coz I know you're good in firing. ..so I can visualise everything you said here...

    Nice long poem / story
    well done

    Gel

  • 10 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    An accomplished piece of writing, full of great visuals and detail.
    This is well penned - something a little different on P&Q and pleasing to read in terms of the layout.

    Well done and all the best,

    Ben

    • 10 months ago

      by EVERLUCENT

      Thank you sir Ben. I'm really honored that you noticed my piece. :)