Comments : Strength lost in the journey of life

  • 1 year ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Hi Ademole,

    This is a dark but very well written piece

    The wind blew with the scorching heat of the sun and the brave in heart became weary at the sound of crying babies, so the soul of mortals faint from trembling
    Hope turns into fear as iceberg merges with the sea
    With mystery comes the one to fulfill the prophecy
    The people received the rebirth of the new dawn, joy seen at edge of doom

    Hmmmn this bring me some chill. .Love the words you use

    Great piece