Comments : Blackhole (Acrostic)

  • 1 year ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Jessica. Having someone we trust lie to us is hard. You have portrayed beautifully. Well done

  • 1 year ago

    by Em

    One word.

  • 1 year ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Hello Jessica,

    I love this form. I have written many and whenever I have, I find they have a mind of there own. Or should I say, a way of giving a subconscious mind words.

    The word, 'Black hole' is visual. A powerful force, an imploded star, drawing all and everything into it. For you to use this as a metaphor for being lied to, treated badly really ups the anti. It screams with the same 'black hole' force - anger, frustration, its all there. I love the last line, it ends this piece superbly.

    Well done.


  • 1 year ago

    by Brenda

    Jessica, such a true write. There's nothing worse when you have your trust violated. You really did a wonderful write with this-