Comments : I love you

  • 9 months ago

    by Brenda

    Vincent, such a endearing write. It's hard to be the one in the shadows, longing to be that guy, not just a friend, not just a sounding board but that "guy"! You really put that forward in this write really well.

  • 9 months ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Hi there,

    this is the first poem I read from you and I must said and you need to know that this is an astonishing work... I like the rhythm and the words plus the emotions worked together and create a masterpiece like this. .. I hope someone can write me a poem like this. .. This is sweet. ... sometimes it doesn't matter how love hurt us, what matters most is how we give love. .

    Well done

    Gel

    • 9 months ago

      by vincent

      Well thanks.. Im glad you thought it sweet. I hope she'll also like it.

  • 9 months ago

    by Em

    Such a beautiful write... I have been there knowing someone is still in love with somebody else but being there come what may just a shame the son of a gun moved to Aus to fulfill his dreams for 6 months and that he is my best mate lol I do sure as hell pick the wrong ones but take comfort knowing that no matter what they know you are there for them, that's all we can do in these situations.
    All the best,
    Em