Vincent, such a endearing write. It's hard to be the one in the shadows, longing to be that guy, not just a friend, not just a sounding board but that "guy"! You really put that forward in this write really well.
this is the first poem I read from you and I must said and you need to know that this is an astonishing work... I like the rhythm and the words plus the emotions worked together and create a masterpiece like this. .. I hope someone can write me a poem like this. .. This is sweet. ... sometimes it doesn't matter how love hurt us, what matters most is how we give love. .
Well thanks.. Im glad you thought it sweet. I hope she'll also like it.
1 year ago
Such a beautiful write... I have been there knowing someone is still in love with somebody else but being there come what may just a shame the son of a gun moved to Aus to fulfill his dreams for 6 months and that he is my best mate lol I do sure as hell pick the wrong ones but take comfort knowing that no matter what they know you are there for them, that's all we can do in these situations.
All the best,