Comments : Tears (Form - Acrostic)

  • 10 months ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    I like this form. I often write these when I can't find the words. Here you have not only found the words for this acrostic of 'tears', but you've manage to rhyme them too.

    "Sorrow has poisoned my mind like a snake."
    ^
    I liked this line - nice simile.

    Well done, good job!

    • 10 months ago

      by Augustus Black

      Sir - Thanks a lot for the uplifting comment.

  • 10 months ago

    by Em

    One word: Nominated.
    Also, It's hard to find the words in these forms sometimes and to rhyme them too is even harder, you did both.

    Well done.
    Em

    • 10 months ago

      by Augustus Black

      Oh, thank you very much, you are very sweet and soft.
      Well..yes, it was difficult. Thanks again. Em

  • 10 months ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    I'm glad Em nominated this one. .. I like this acrostic ,words perfectly fit to it's acronym....

    well Done

    Gel

  • 10 months ago

    by Belle

    I love it, the words blend nicely. Good job.

    -Belle

  • 6 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    I stumbled upon a gem. I liked it very much. You have a way with formed poetry! Great write.